ਹਰਿੰਦਰ ਬਰਾੜ ਦੀਆਂ ਦੋ ਕਵਿਤਾਵਾਂ

the 1st poem is very touching inspired by stark reality though a bit prosaic,second is obscure but having a good theme .Congrats on the first entry !

bahut achha ,changa idea

jis tera tusi likhya a apni first poem its is realy true tusi jis tera apni dil de gall sabda vich pash keeti thuda hosla bhoot badda a man te stude karde same roo pya te tusi likhde same kisd tera keeta hove ga but its is realy gud it bring me in my villege and my sweet home love always